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Dancing with Duality

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Come to me softly,
   In my darkness
 In my silence...

Stay with me forever,
   Take my hand
 Take my heart...

I seek only Your presence,
   Be my love
 Be my All...




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The Nameless Love knows no bounds...
but those created in the human mind.
Written July 20th, 2006

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  • Gogetalife
    April 1, 2007
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    Wow I am touched with this piece, very thought provoking..great job
    AJ


  • suseann
    July 26, 2006
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    Very commited verse to a timeless felt love. And how did you get that picture of me dancing at the company Christmas party.Lampshade on my head and all!Ha! Love this sweet write.~~Suseann


  • ToltecWarrior
    July 26, 2006
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    I found this piece very thought provoking. Dancing with duality... As long as we percieve ourselves as separate, the best we can do is to dance. Dancing is a great metaphor here because dancing requires flowing, releasing, joining, merging with another. I see the whirling dervish. I interpret this lovely sight as the divine dance; merging with the infinite love of God.

    Dance my friend! Dance!

    namaste~

    TW


  • maa gold member
    July 25, 2006
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    yes, yes, yes ...

    I am full of awe ...


  • Taranand
    July 25, 2006
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    Beautiful, dear Presence. There is no duality in that one True Love, for it is not bound by the laws of time and space, but dwells constantly within the heart of each and every human being, just waiting to be uncovered, just waiting to be felt...and it is only us who can see if this heart is full or empty and only us that can allow this heart to be filled.
    You are indeed a shining light and a shining example of a heart touched by Darshan. Wonderful. Love, Tara


  • Night Hope gold member
    July 22, 2006
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    Sighhh...Ahhh, Pres...what a lovely Soul you are, my Friend...so enlightened, we may as well turn out the lamps...they're redundant when you're around, Scribe...Beauty~full & scented with the eternal essence of Truth...Your beloved is most fortunate, as are you...Bravo... Wanda


  • MargaretG
    July 21, 2006
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    Simply beautiful. I like the three-fold symmetry and layers of perception.


  • MyrddinEmrys silver member
    July 21, 2006
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    Truly a well choreographed statement of Truth! I see here utterly peaceful stillness found within the dervishes mad whirl as he blends heart to Heart, joining beloved and Beloved in a sweet solo for two.

    Simply, sweetly and gently stepped, bright Dancer!


  • janejainejayne gold member
    July 21, 2006
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    Beautiful!!!!

    Dear Presence, Whirl away and touch heaven. Oh, that I could have your inspiration for a soaring moment. You are in touch with your soul! Beautiful! Jane


  • Mountain of Light
    July 21, 2006
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    simple and beautiful

    Ah, another one who pines for the Real. beyond illusions. sparseness is what i love, and struggle with...i enjoyed this.


  • Providence
    July 21, 2006
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    Oh This touched my heart so softly--so deeply that it stirred tears in my soul. The tenderness, the love, the gentle presence of the Nameless Love!

    Bravo!
    Bravo!
    Bravo!

    Marianne

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