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I Will Die Without YOU

I need you.....but you won't believe me.
It's obvious that you don't feel the same as I do.
How will I survive without your warm gentle love?
What must I do to make you see?
All you say is that I want you to be who I want you to be.
You don't understand.....I honestly do truely love you.
I would do anything for you.
You have been my life and everything that I need.
I need you and it's killing me so much inside.
I know that you'll never be able to love me.....
and that's what hurts the most.
You said you always would.
What happened to a love so pure and true?
I know I'm not the greatest person and I may be hard to love.
But no matter what I say or do....I know that you will never feel the same

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Written July 20th, 2006

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  • XxXdArCyNiCoLeXxX
    July 21, 2006
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    Thanx you so very much!

    DracyNicole


  • XxXdArCyNiCoLeXxX
    July 21, 2006
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    Thanx Tim.....you're such a wonderful friend

    DarcyNicole


  • -Tears Of Pain-
    July 20, 2006
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    aww this is sad...And it had emotion...It was powerful..I could feel the sadness in it's words...You did a really great job on this poem!!

    ~^Sara^~


  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 20, 2006
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    I can feel the emotions pouring forth so sincere here my sweet friend, I hope you know you are very special no matter what, and never forget that! Well expressed, happy thoughts and much love I send your way sweet soul!

    -Timothy