Taken
To an
enchanted
sleep in
midnight's
silent dark
soft breaths
tell of her
heart's desires
gently aroused
by her
spirits weave
through
a corridor
of yearning
for his familiar sigh
to once again
serenade
her~
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Written April 3rd, 2003
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A seranading sigh---
so romantic.
Beautiful presentation, Susan!!!
Love it!
M-C
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Nice flow and the imagry is quite peaceful,
an enchanting vision! --Very well done
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This is all dreamlike and soft. The format means that the previous line slips away just as you read the next.. like the whole poem is passing on a breeze.. very effective.
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Beautiful
This was so beautiful! Everything you write is wonderful, and you always pick the best art/picture to go with the poem creating perfect ambience. Feels great to come and read you! I should come back more often! Thanx for sharing this! -
Such an amazing piece hun. I like how it just kept going, almost without a pause, to be this weaved in sentence.
You sure do have a way with words. I am sorry that you won't be able to renew, cause I just love the pictures that you use. Although I have to tell you hun, picture or no picture, your words are enough of a picture for me.
I loved this Susan, truly I do...
~Much love hun~
Lady Sarah
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Susan this is so beautiful.. you can akways carry me to a soft and gentle place thanks for sharing this
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Susan this is beautiful, sorry I have not been reading as much. I have been reading Danna's story. If you get a chance check it out. This is a beautiful succinct write my friend.
Hope this finds you well.
Red -
ohhhhh, heavenly images, heavenly setting, wow, very nicely expressed. seems different than i'm used to reading by you, but very awesome susan very awesome poem
kayla* -
The choice of the picture was perfect. A strong feeling of yearning and loving that is well expressed in these verses.
Ali -
enchanting
WOW!!! You never fail to draw me in with the beauty of your words, the visions you paint before my inner eye...I have missed chatting with you on her...and missed you and your beautiful soul...Now I have to play catch up but oh how fun that will be...as always a DELIGHT!!! HUGS, Ro -
Excellent! Lovely poem!
Lovely poem, Sis! This was my favorite part..."yearning for his familiar sigh to once again serenade her~"
Love,
Maureen
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Really sensual piece for not being long. Wonderful way you make the feelings real. Love it! Thanks!!!
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tender, loving image filled pc.
You always carry me on a mental journey, that I enjoy. This is an awesome, beautiful, tender, loving piece. Your talent is well known here at AP, my friend. Enjoy your writes so very much. Keep them coming, I'll keep reading. God Bless and thanks for the smiles today! -
Lovely write Susan
So tender and beautiful Susan you penned this lovely.
Hugs,Sherry
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