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spring of life

The Spring of life dies
with every fleeting moment
forever its drained

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this is just a stab at a haiku..im not very good at them but i liked the concept behind this one
Written July 20th, 2006

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  • Arcadiosiempre
    July 20, 2006
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    Good poem i loved it.
    It's short but thats ok since it's a haiku