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My World

Without the stars, the sky would fall apart
And without love, the heart can fall in two
As the sky falls into a black abyss, the heart falls and breaks
The stars dont show while the love stays gone

Without the sky, the sun falls to a deep sleep
And if there wasnt compassion, feelings would go numb
The sun that once burned bright is now cold as ice
The feeling that before was compassion is now dark as night

Without the air, the earth would have no life
And if there was no life, I could never feel your touch
The world goes silent without the air to breathe
Since your soft touch is gone, I will always keep it with me

Your eyes are the stars that fell from my heart
While your compassion was the sun brightning up my sense of feeling
As your touch was the air I needed to breathe
That's why I would give the entire world, because you are all I need

Author notes

Not one of my best ones but I like it....it isnt about anyone in particular...it is about a number of my close friends who are always there for me.
Written July 20th, 2006

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