forsythia buds
burst in yellow profusion
welcoming the spring.
Author notes
Purple Pnions
Written April 3rd, 2003
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A contest entry
- Haikus by sunnysunnymorning02.
300 points, ended May 1, 2006, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Haikus by MyDecember.
450 points, ended March 17, 2008, 19 entries
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great vocabulary!
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a good piece of haiku poetry penned here with style and grace, spring is just about here, nearly. good luck in the contest.
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I like the way that flower just wiggles around in my mouth. I enjoyed you haiku. Good Luck in the contest.
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forsythia is probably my favorite of all the first signs of spring, but they leave too soon! I like the image and and message conveyed by this haiku, but just feel maybe the last line--(keeping to your five-syllable count) might read better as "to welcome the spring."
other than that, a really good haiku and I wish you much luck in the contest!
Jo -
hmmm this is good.. I loved this haiku. you did very well with it ..thanks for sharing this piece, and keep up with the awesome poetry!!!
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This is a very sweet haiku. I loved it. Descriptive and gracefull, just like any Japanese one. Great job! Good luck and thanks for entering.
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Wow this is great. I love spring
Very nicely written, I could smell the flowers Thanks so much for following rules. Thanks for entering and good luck!
~Lana
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calming goodness
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i am jelouse for i can not write haiku. good job, it made sence and i loved it.
Christie ~ TranquilMeldoy -
That was a beautiful poem...."KISS" Keep it simple short...loved it...it was excellent
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a lovely welocme
excellent ku
i truly enjoyed -
Lovely
Hugs,Sherry
Edited on Apr 03, 1:40 p.m. because ''.
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