Stars collide across the sky,
Faeries weep and angels cry,
Confetti kisses sparkle still,
Fallen raindrops of acid kill,
Sulphuric burns and glitter sores,
Washed up on beaches, sandy shores.
Time doth pass in simple lies,
Sacred tears bleed from my eyes.
Cravings consume cluttered minds,
Her past that haunts, forever reminds..
Shattered fragments of confusing thought,
Make no sense to a mind distraught.
Shards of peace, and tranquillity,
Collapse, implode upon my sanity.
The anaesthetics wearing thin,
I feel uncomfortable inside my skin.
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Written July 20th, 2006
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Well done for writing a rhyming poem, that actually works. Try as I might, I just can't do that. sigh Which is why I write more plain versey stuff. And I love some of the phrases used her, like 'confetti kisses'.
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Yeah I tried to write a rhyming poem using some of the pretty phrases from some old poems. They don't particularly link though.
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hmmm... Theres nto much I can say about this one Katy, its quite different from what im used to sing from you, but different is never bad -smile- There are quite a few phrases in this poem that I remember from poems passed. Im curious if a correlation exists. We shall have to discuss our latest writes when we next speak.
love you
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amazing poem so much thought and feeling has gone into it! keep it up! -
Nice poem there katey :] there are some good words there that make it good too. I like it =]
Gino xxxxx -
omg... thatz awesome... perfect rhyme... top rythm... i like it
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