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Death

A raven as black as death,
coming for your soul.

You never see it,
until it's too late.

Looking for a thriving creature
to take.
Looking for you.

It's coming for you.
Be on the watch for it,
be ready.

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Written July 19th, 2006

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  • lesbian-princess
    July 6, 2007
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    good..


  • Sandygram
    July 28, 2006
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    Hi Chris, I just stopped by to say hi and see how you are. Hope all is well. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram
    July 28, 2006
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    This was a wonderful dark write Chris. I love the imagery you wrote. Excellent write. Keep writing. Take care, Sandy
    Edited on Jul 28, 7:04 p.m. because ''.

  • Cloudreamer
    July 20, 2006
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    um... okay...wow. Chris. I didn't know you felt so...so....Dark and depressed and all Edgar Allen Poe like. Great job though, I still liked it, and I usually hate dark writes!


  • Spring-Sparrow
    July 19, 2006
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    Wow. Chris is getting...dark. lol...good job.

  • Lara Romero
    July 19, 2006
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    Thanks for the heads up on my early demise. I just wish I had more time to enjoy this poem. It is rather good you know. I give it an

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