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Red Silk Sheets

As your smooth fingers slowly slide down my naked body,
I begin to tingle.
As your luscious lips begin to caress mine,
I begin to tremble.
As your grayish gold eyes look into mine,
I begin to yearn for more.
I take control.
As I push you on your back,
I explore your whole with my eyes…and my lips.
I caress your breasts with my hands,
And you do the same to mine.
My want for you is unbearable.
As I kiss my way down your body,
It’s like I can almost taste your sweet nectar.
I want you.
I need you.
As I reach your promise land,
And begin to explore the familiar territory with my tongue,
You finally have your sweet release.
When completed, your inner savage comes to surface.
You grab me harshly, but lovingly once again.
I am thrown back on the bed.
Your hands begin to caress me,
Over every inch that’s possible to touch.
Over my face, arms, breasts, stomach, and finally in between my thighs.
I feel relief in what’s about to come.
As soon as I feel you touch me,
I begin to breath harder.
When your lips touch the “gift” I have given you for eternity,
I release my essence.
I pull you on me, and nestle with you in red silk sheets,
While I stroke your long chocolate hair.
And with this,
We sleep. . .

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Written July 19th, 2006

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  • painstricken
    July 20, 2006
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    This is very beautiful! To share something so loving and eternal. Beautiful.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 19, 2006
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    Very nice. Soft and sensual, just the right touch of passion. Excellent job with this enticing piece.

    Thanks for entering and good luck
    Storm