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A Face

A face in my dreams
I scream out for you
your eyes search me
as you look in the distance
you can't see me
you can't hear me
awakening to think of you
my hearts desires
beyond my understanding
can not be disclosed
I can not rest in peace
until I hear your voice
saying sorry
searching the blame
a face in my dreams
forever haunting...
forever searching...
never finding me

Author notes

yet another one for a certin someone who will never hear and who doesn't give a damn
Written July 19th, 2006

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  • A Point Of Light
    August 8, 2006
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    i kinda like the pooem but can i comment on the color of the poem....very very hard to read without having to high lite it... many blessings!


  • starlock
    July 19, 2006
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    wow, i like the poem. you can feel the compext emtions, and the feeling that someone doesnt really care. your almsot trying to get the person to relise that they should take the blame, while they seem to be chucking it right back at you. i like the idea of being like a restel dead, waiting for somone to come to the relisation, its almost haunting. this idea is suported in the fact the he never seems to see the person, like a ghost.
    very good write.
    keep up the brillint work.
    starlockx