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What if....

What if tomorrow, you become blind?
Could you remember all your colors?
Could you remember how to find,
your loved one and those significant others?

What if tomorrow, you were told you have cancer?
What would you do next?
Would you try and find an answer?
Or write down your will in that special text?

What if tomorrow, your soul mate walked past?
Would you take the time to notice?
Or would you just let them keep walkin past?
Would you end up in a counselor's office?

What if tomorrow, you became pregnant?
Could you live through all the tears?
Would your 4 year old sister make a good aunt?
Would you wonder whats going into other's ears?

What if tomorrow, you becam deaf?
Could you know when someone said "I love you" ?
After everyone left,
Cause they dont know what to do...

What if your tomorrow never came?
Would everyone always remain blue?
Or would things just remain the same?
Did you tell enough " I love you's" ?

** What if your tomorrow never came? Would you have completed all of your dreams and wishes. What about all those goals? How about love? Did you take a risk and tell someone you love them...just to see what they say back? Or are you afraid of ruining your friendship? DON'T! Take a chance...everyone deserves at least one...If you are friends, then want to become more...give it a whirl..what do you have to loose? If you do loose your friendship..it wasnt strong enough to begin with...... Life a dance, you'll learn as you go..Sometimes you'll lead but sometimes you'll follow...Take  a risk! Take a leap! don't be afraid of the unknown..**

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Written April 2nd, 2003

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  • nokiddin08
    December 8, 2003
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    yes it makes you think ALOT. = u deserve one girly


  • April 12, 2003
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    I like the ideas you have brought up in this piece. what if this, what if that, either way life should be lived to the fullest, chances should be taken... thank you for your inspiration!


  • Zeek
    April 6, 2003
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    Thought Provoking

    I really like this, it makes you think a lot... about a lot of things. A truly thought-provoking piece, really made me wonder. Great write, Keep writing!
    ~Zeek
    P.S. Thank you for the comment on my poem


  • April 6, 2003
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    this is a very good poem
    a person should never ever take things for granted.
    Carpe diem

    ,,,=^..^=,,, Clare

  • HayHay
    April 5, 2003
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    OMG this is a great poems and it makes you think about life and it gives you a clue of how we take things for granted so much and we don't even realize but wonderful poem!
    Love ALwayz
    ~*Hayley*~


  • CosmoPink
    April 5, 2003
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    I agree with this very much. We have to live for the day, and leave the rest up to faith. Beautiful write! Paulie


  • VanyaVilya
    April 2, 2003
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    Great message, so true. It was like an e~mail i got once. Once again, great message. I liked it. Thanks for the great write, very inspirational -ash

  • sheshe143
    April 2, 2003
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    tomorrow comes today!

    excellent write-i enjoyed

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