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Where are you?

When I am down
Where are you?
When i cry
Why aren't you by my side?
I need you!
and you are gone
some party
the mall
When it all comes down to it
Where are you?
Dont you care?

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Written July 18th, 2006

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  • mad hattie
    December 11, 2008
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    we never need someone who disregards us like this.

    peace


  • YoungLuvin
    July 18, 2006
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    bravo

    short but sweet...i feel where u r coming from!! gr8 write
    YL