Do you love me?
You laid your head on my chest
I have my answer
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Written July 18th, 2006
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So Sweet..like this too!
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SO TRULY BEAUTIFUL!
Simple expression but one that says so much! Very beautiful!
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I enjoyed this poem, in just three simple lines, you said so very much. This had such a peaceful, loving feeling to it, and laying one's head upon anothers chest is such a loving gesture...so sweet.
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How wonderful!! With so few words we know the whole story!! Great writing. Many thoughts can go through one's head after reading this delightful poem. Warm Regards...vivela
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guilty as charged
that was short, but the size made no difference. It said all that it needed to, in the best way that it could. I really liked it and i wish you good luck. -
Simple and sweet! I like that! Very powerfully stated. Love and hugs...
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*smiles sweetly to herself - really very beautiful.
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nice that was ok but I need more keep up the work
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Wonderful! I find that the shortest and simplest poems often tell the most stunning things. This is wonderful. I feel the emotion through those three simple lines. Awesome job!
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Wow!! so short but tells so much!! i love it!!
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Wonderful
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This is the absoulte best... Ummm... Whatdayamacallit? Haiku? Short poem? Anyways... Normally I dislike brievity in a poem, but this one actually arouses an emotional response in me (I take a bit to get "into" most poems; Few poems can evoke a deep response from me for this reason).
Enough with my stupidity.
An excellent poem deserves to be recognized as such. -
Oh yes...oh, yes...oh, yes....simply and wonderfully..."Yes"
"I traced your profile and memorized each rib...." I wrote once.....
You know that rib and I know that head....we both know the breasts of it. -
this is lovely short n precise cuts straight to the point without being complicated this is most def a wonderful technique i have never seen anyone write in this manner before. i am completely speechless magnificent jst plane magnificent.
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very nice work . i do love poetry from the heart and soul i always have. and thanks agaon for the comment on true wllusions
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sometimes that's all it takes, no words spoken yet you know that you are loved. this is great. i very much enjoyed your poem. you have written of such love within just a few words, very talented.
great job.
joyce
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Great!!
Wow!
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This is sweet and concise. It's short, but you say so much with so few words. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!
And thank you so much for your encouraging words. I really appreciate it :-)
Edited on Jul 18, 9:38 p.m. because ''. -
This is short and sweet! I love it! It says a lot in so few words!
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very pretty poem
short but left something
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Such a great contrast. The form, with its abrupt ending and blunt rhythm, give a harsh effect, which is completely opposite of the mood of your theme and the image that you conjure up. A great effect. Nice work
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Short, sweet, and beautiful!
Thank you for sharing!
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