Dear Jesus,
Help me be myself
like nobody else
help me make choices
that i won't later regret
please help me be free
to start over for me
help me be bright
so to others, i am out of sight
help me be wise
not little for size
help me to not fear
to keep my family near
help me love
so that others may think that i am a dove
help me be true
so that others can believe in you
help me be smart
so that i know good things by heart
help me see clear
so that know when bad things are near
Dear Jesus,
help me forever more
so i could soon soar
Forever i will love you,
Corinne
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Written July 18th, 2006
A contest entry
- Place of Prayer Contest #38 Members only! by Samplette.
300 points, ended August 2, 2006, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is sweet. Thank you for entering the contest. I join you in your prayer.
Sam
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This was absolutely lovely! I liked the rhymes and the whole way you wrote this. Keep on writing!
LittleAnn
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This was a truely inspirational poem that I think all of us pray (or at least feel) and I love poems that rhyme (they seem easier to read to me) so added points for that! Well done, and may God bless you more than he already has!
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Very nice. This is a prayer we could all pray. Glenda
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This is absolutely beautiful! I love the rhyming and it's so simple, yet very powerful. You have done a wonderful job on this poem. God is awesome and so good. Blessings to you, and good luck in the contest.
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Darling, this so touched my heart. You have gone to the right place for your supplications. If you live as the Lord would like, you will find safety and happiness. Nice poem.
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