Grew from a seed within your womb
You hold me now against your breast
Suckling still I feed from your body
Whilst in your arms I rest
I see much love looking down on me
Can you read my thoughts so true
And as I grow my mother
Can I depend on you
If I should fall, would you catch me
If I cry, will you dry my tears
If I run towards your open arms
Will you hold me, and comfort my fears
Will you teach me without hesitation
Nourish my soul with no evil in mind
For I am the seed that was planted with love
I am in the plan
God designed.
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Written July 18th, 2006
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Yes Mareta I know you understand love, you bringing up 3 of your own and doing a most fantastic job...by the way ..where is that beautiful grand daughter of mine..I miss her..give her this
from me.. thank you for your comment my dear, and for you
Love
Babs
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Hello sweetie, I am pleased you enjoyed it...and I know you will be a wonderful mom..BUT NOT FOR A FEW MORE YEARS I HOPE
..be happy and thank you for your lovely comment
Love you lots
Aunty Babs
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thank you for reading ..I really appreciate your comment..500 poems, goodness I must go take a look..thanks again
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thank you so much
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thank you for such a wonderful comment
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You are such a devoted poet dear Bargb. Your kindness and goodness really shows through in this so different and so wonderful poem. You are becoming quite a poet my friend. You seem to always write deeply meaningful poem and your range has blossomed into a flower. This is an exceptional poem my dear friend.--God Bless -
Precious
"Unconditional love" that's what being a mother is, right from birth they put their complete trust in us, and it's our job to uphold that faith so that they may grow into well-adjusted adults, and pass on that precious gift of love to the next generation...Thanks for sharing the babies point of view - Mareta
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Aunty! This was such a touching poem!I wish my mom was like that.I am gonna be like when I am mom..hehe.This was a really well writtin poem..good job! Love ya tons! -
Beautifully, beautifully written!
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!! You did a great job on this one! And from the view of a baby! That is amazing! I love it! This is soooooooo good! Keep that pen flowing!
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beautiful poem. its a nice change from all the angst in here. i can't wait until i get married and have a child of my own. i especially like the last few lines. though i'm not one with a strong reliance on a god or faith. i think its a cute means of expression
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wow I agree wid blackstart16
great cool poem, keep up the wonderful job
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awwwwww, this is is cute. I knwo it's a baby. I just know it. But it so charming and sweet that it touched me. Literally. No I don't have a baby. hhaha, Bu tthi sis nice for a baby who doesn't talk but still wants to know. VEry good. Excellent work of literature I think it's wonderful. Bravo.
Blackstar16
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