Asleep at the wheel with this heart so content,
like the taste of honey in air, from a hives scent.
Mending as one through these waters I steer,
quiet and remote is why I've decided to be here.
with the grace of beauty beyond every sway,
as ripples of water guide me to a new path way.
Tall trees reflection off of these calm waters eyes,
and a sense of warmth, from the crystal blue skies.
Serenity has enlightened air of surrounding trees,
with my mind sweeping this soft suttle breeze.
Natures harmony as far as the eye can see,
that's just how God had intended it to be.
Author notes
Written July 18th, 2006
A contest entry
- BEAUTY by Swan song.
450 points, ended August 23, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very good!!!!I loved the ease and flow of this poem Well done
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o dear
absolutely fantastic
you are a brilliant writer
Keep penning . . . keep sharing . . . and much luck to you in the contest as well as any and all future poetic ventures!
Maggie -
I like this
nice job
best wishes
Peace Muddy -
V ery pretty and calming poem, nice relaxing and poetic, good luck as this just may be a gold..
MM -
hi dear uncle
I'm not the first one this time?
This is so wonderful and beautiful. I love the nice picture too.
Wish you luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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wow
god bless you
that is a great poem
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Beautiful, just beautiful. I simply love it. Very well done
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