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You deserve no more from me
So no more time shall I wait.
I cannot spend my time waiting
For an answer I already know.

I prefer to think back
To the times at the start.
Before whatever it was changed you.
Before the distance grew.

I wish to enjoy my summer,
i hoped it would be with you.
But now you no longer make me happy,
So I see that cannot be.

I cannot wait any longer for you to decide,
If I am what you truly want.
So I sit here now,
And put an end to us.

Maybe we can see what things are like,
In the near future.
If you can finally see what it is you want,
If we can clearly be together.

But now,
You deserve no more from me
So no more time shall I wait.
I cannot spend my time waiting
For an answer I already know.

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Written July 18th, 2006

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  • Dusty
    September 9, 2006
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    8.10

    beautiful and most inspiring.... Keep posting x x x xx

  • Momentaryhappiness
    July 19, 2006
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    yeah actually she has picked well. hes a really good friend of mine, and thats the problem! at the moment i dont see him as anymore than that. but we will see. Yeah hopefully i will be!

  • rockchick247
    July 18, 2006
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    lol. and has she picked well? u'll be over him in no time!

  • Momentaryhappiness
    July 18, 2006
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    haha yeah. thats what my friend thinks, and she already has someone lined up!!!!!

  • rockchick247
    July 18, 2006
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    yup its only human. you just need to find someone else to help you get over him! *looks around* someone is prob just around the corner!

  • Momentaryhappiness
    July 18, 2006
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    yeah. but unfortunatley part of me still sees it as a loss of mine too! but i suppose that is only human

  • rockchick247
    July 18, 2006
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    good! well done for making the decision! his loss...

  • Momentaryhappiness
    July 18, 2006
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    thanks. and whats surprising is i dont feel all that bad. Its like a weight has been lifted off my shoulders. I mean its not like it was an amazing relationship, or a long one, i mean i havent seen him for 4 weeks! so... i feel ok at the moment!
    x

  • rockchick247
    July 18, 2006
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    you go girl! you can't wait forever, he's stupid if he hasn't realised that by now! great poem

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