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Will You Be Dreaming Tonight?

Breathing whispers,
as they fall onto shadows,
and hide within the corners,
trapped in our fiddled webs,
for a spider to lullaby goodnight.

see me?

look past the shadows,
beyond the stars,
see me for the first time, smiling,
My head held high,
above the arms of today.

See me now?
I thought so.

Windows block the clocks,
their misted happiness,
disturbing reality's chimes,
nothing but insanity,
looking us in the eye.

Past that you will see,
a mountain of voices,
echoing in the bodies,
Anticipated cliches hear,
churned chatter hushed the night.

See me dreaming?

dreaming tonight.

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Written July 18th, 2006

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  • KustomMade
    September 9, 2006
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    its sweet in a dark way...original thoughts...