Another one gone
the pain is unreal
every single song
says he isn't here
I try to raise my head
from my tear stained pillow
but it feels like lead
and i need to sleep
He said he loved me
i heard it loud and clear
the problem is i agreed
that's where it went wrong
I let myself fall in love
when i knew it wasn't best
heart break fits me like a glove
one worn too many times
I knew i should watch my step
and yet i fell right in
next time I'll not trip
but this time i might not live
because i cannot see the light
and everyone knows
darkness gives me such fright
that i might up and die
before i get another chance
to dive right into love
and once again feel the lance
through my heart that always comes
even though i try so hard
to not fall in
to not let myself go that far
i just cant help but
fall head over heels
and they always leave me
they don't care how it feels
they just wanna get laid
when i don't give in
they leave me in the cold
i hate men
they stole my soul
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k. it's alive! i hope ya'll like it.
Written July 18th, 2006
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In this point in my life such a piece has an amazing impact of inspiration. i am in awww at how much you have dug into my mind and spoke of my thoughts. great job and i hope to be inspired by your writes again.
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You love quickly my friend.
Perhaps...well perhaps you should keep your heart guarded for a change. This way...the one who loves you, will work to have you love him back.
Like I was saying, before I had to go..
The europeans are such gentlemen. So sweet and nice...because they're raised to treat females that way.
Maybe you should just...
Raise your standards.
Seeing as you only have 1, racial standard.
Maybe you should bump that up to, being a gentleman, or making them work for you or something.
Only a suggestion my dear.
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