paint my sky mellow ,yellow again
carefree and bright,wish her back,that yellow rain
my childhood lost,yellow in pain
pour in the innocence,yellow my name
paint my sky yellow, yes yellow again.
Author notes
hey yellow connects to the word connect itself,it is one colour with can mingle with anyother and form a new shade but geting yellow my mixing anyother colour is tuff.
same as ones childhood,once lost it never returns 
Written July 17th, 2006
A contest entry
- ~Yellow~ by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended July 18, 2006, 7 entries
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i don't get it.
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wow, this is really good although it must be about the color yellow, i get a much different meaning from it and i know it is from a personal experiance i am now going through right now. these lines really struck me and it takes alot to do that these days...
"carefree and bright,wish her back,that yellow rain
my childhood lost,yellow in pain"
Graet job. Be Well and Be Blessed
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***moons
no words for it......yellow again
take care & ....bindaas -
hey vic
you are a gem
my i must say hats off to you for reading my all
thats so nice of you
and these poems are jus a fun sake ,glad u like them all
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3 Stars ***
Wow.. this small poem reminded me of the song "YELLOW" by "Coldplay" ... I love that song.. and i like this poem too
... never knew about the fact you stated in the author's page...coolio
anyways.. best of luck in the contest
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend... just keep it up.. your humble little friend... ... 
.. .. - vic ( who else? )
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I liek how you took the common view of yellow and made it into an interestign read<3. Nice write. Good luck in this contest
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Very imaginative and creative. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x LB
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