A chance meeting a long time ago,
Led me to feelings I was before afraid to show.
After almost a year,
I cannot cry another tear.
Lying to my face,
Has made you fall from grace,
Here we are fighting again,
Surrounded in our world of sin.
I cannot take being without you,
Even though to me you are untrue,
I'm got a razorblade with my name on it, a gun with yours, I'll say this lasts forever,
I know it can never get better.
So tonight I will take this gun in my hand,
And make the world understand,
That I am not one to be treated bad,
I'm not the one you want to make sad.
After I use this gun,
I will take the razorblade, and have a little fun,
I will slide the blade across my wrists,
There will be no more pain from this.
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Rob Zombie has the most awesome music in the world!
Written July 17th, 2006
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- I've Got A Razorblade With My Name On It, And A Gun With Yours, I'll Say This Lasts Forever by xBeautifulxHellx.
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wow powerful visuals!!! great way to show the pain from the break up this write is amazing good luck in the contest

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