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Fall Away

I try to stop myself from Falling,
But I always Fail.
I hold your hand, in Hopes of Vanity that it will stop,
But it doesn't.
It just keeps going faster and faster.
Tumbling around, spinning out of control.
You wrap your powerful arms around me,
And try to protect me from the Confusion.
But you Fail again.

I don't want to Fall Away from this,
But I have to choose sometime....
I don't want to Fall Away from you,
But now I have to decide just want to do.

This is no way to live,
Afraid that everything's a Lie Spun by you.
Are they really my Friends?
Or just pretending?
I am so Confused and am suffocating in you.

You hold tight, but only to lose me.
You don't want to let go,
You don't want to Fall Away,
But you have to discover.
You must free me.

You try to lock me up,
To keep me save,
But like Water has,
I slip away from you.
I Fall Away.

The Wind blows me around the surrounding halls,
And causes the candles to flicker.
Silently, I am Spirited Away,
I Fall Away.

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I really don't have anything to say, but it will be continued, I Promise.
Written July 17th, 2006

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  • purplebubbles
    July 18, 2006
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    this worlds turning into an oven, heating up and showing all flaws, all limits are tested...and my orientation is too O.o me and lucianna...yer i kinda ill write it in an im, i dont wnt ppl to know wut ive done, but we did stuff hahahah
    but man this world has problems, i have problems. Theres a dark cloud taht wont leave me alone...and then i drink to much foir my own good, i might as well be an alco, and smoking, for that matter ask mar...gah

    then what else can i complain bout? lol im not trying to worry u, just updatings.

    Lovely poem sweatheart, its good to express ones self..thats wut i got my pshycotherapist for right? [shes a right bitch]
    anyway
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