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Diminish my life

Do you look at me, and think whore?
Think what I'm doing is wrong
Think that it's just sex, that's all it is
Sex between two exes and friends.

Do you cheapen what we have together?
Put it down to the fact we're teenagers
That we get frustrated time after time
And just use each other to release it

Can't you see the love that's still there?
Still burning inside
Something we can't get rid of
No matter how hard we try

Or do you disagree?
Think when he holds me it's fake
When he looks deep into my eyes it's an act
When he tells me he loves me,
when he protects and keeps me safe,
Is it all just lies?

Meaningless lies, that he uses to keep me?
To fuel me into seeing him more

Well let me tell all you narrow minded people,
If only it were as easy as that.
No feelings, no strings attached...
Whether you like it or not, whether you believe it or not
This is love

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yea, i sound like i'm ranting. and it doesn't make much sense..
Written July 17th, 2006

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  • Trixie08
    October 24, 2006
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    Can't you see the love that's still there?
    Still burning inside
    Something we can't get rid of
    No matter how hard we try

    Or do you disagree?
    Think when he holds me it's fake
    When he looks deep into my eyes it's an act
    When he tells me he loves me,
    when he protects and keeps me safe,
    Is it all just lies?

    Meaningless lies, that he uses to keep me?
    To fuel me into seeing him more

    Well let me tell all you narrow minded people,
    If only it were as easy as that.
    No feelings, no strings attached...
    Whether you like it or not, whether you believe it or not
    This is love


    These lines are so powerful I really loved the emotion. And this was a very well written piece. Great Write!!!!!
    --Trixie


  • Musical Anomaly
    August 1, 2006
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    I know just how you feel there. If it helps, I never thought it was just sex, or any of the above. best of luck with whatever happens!


  • xxRaquelxx
    July 20, 2006
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    heya darlin, tis an amazin poem and even if ur havin a rant it still flows and sounds really good. I still think u 2 care for each other, kinda know how you feel but u and t have way stronger feelings for each other. great poem!
    huggles and love xxxxxx

  • Xetacube
    July 17, 2006
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    Meaningless lies, that he uses to keep me?
    To fuel me into seeing him more

    check you out writing witty prose...lol
    awsome write jess
    just awsome
    and a little bit magic
    u are the light and i am the shadow
    x x x x