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A Naughty Angel

i sit before you anticipating
this beautiful creature in front of me
so sensual, slowly, just for me, gyrating

out in the world just you and me
spending the day
laughing and holding hands
a spark lit by gentle touches
whispers that are oh so naughty

the smile and warm giggle are delights to my ear
you enjoy it as much as i do
you bite your bottom lip
i feel the sharpness of your nails on my rear

heading home my heart smiles
knowing that what we want is the same
to please one another from the bedroom
to the kitchen tiles

you look me in the eye
with a wild look of passion and desire
telling me that you want to see me squirm
i protest but to no avail, i am yours to tie

i am bound to this chair
my excitement for you clearly evident
taking advantage you slowly gyrate
causing an ache
our arousal filling the air

swaying and moving and stripping like a vet*
no one who knows you outside this room
would ever think to see you move so erotically
you are mine and i want you more than ever
'get over here baby, i can see that your wet'

you come so close grazing my hardness
just rubbing my tip with your lips
pulsing and hot you are
slamming yourself down
enveloping me in your sweet wetness

instant waves of bliss
harder and faster and wilder than ever
hands on my knees, nails digging in
pushing up wanting all of you
more
more n more
moooorrreeeeee you hiss

oh baby......
you're screaming my name
I'm watching you bounce and shake
feeling you drip all around me
the sight and sensations more than i can take...

please babe....
d
  a
   m
    ...n
and you push yourself
d
       o
              w
                   n
getting all of me 
 and our mixture
of ecstasy

you turn around
arms around my neck
gasping for air
...i whisper
'baby, i'm still bound...'

and you just smile....

Author notes

wild in the bedroom...
Written July 17th, 2006

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  • Soul-2-Soul
    July 27, 2006
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    oh really?...and how would you know that?

  • xxslayerxx24
    July 26, 2006
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    Very nicely write poem i relaly enjoied reading it. IT's very erotic

  • Kalshiura
    July 18, 2006
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    Spicy

    Great. It was nice fun to read. Also inspiring to say the least. It is tastefully erotic. I loved it


  • ennovy silver member
    July 18, 2006
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    brilliant & sensual

    wonderful intresting and enchanting piece of poetic art about a angel with horns. I think you done an excellent job on this prose. You had me captured after the bait was taken in the first verse. I was caught! write ON!...ennovy

  • animepoetess
    July 18, 2006
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    Damn, you really know how to make yourself wanted. This was really hot, really steamy, and really not what I needed to read at work...oh well! Great write...

    --Animepoetess


  • Devilish Apatite
    July 18, 2006
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    very erotic, very descriptive, a nice fantasy that one could actually "play out" w/another


  • Deep Crimson I Cry
    July 17, 2006
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    Damn... Damn... SO damn HOT!!!... speachless.. loved it! keep writing. WOW!! Thank you!! Damn!!


  • July 17, 2006
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    HOT DAMN!!! master louie you are the best... bind you please.. in a heartbeat! let me help you with that I am angel dont you see????

    I need a cold shower after tht read. Thanks for sharing thatyummy piece or work!


  • gullionmar
    July 17, 2006
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    wow what a sensual write very well written great imagery great job

  • soulseer
    July 17, 2006
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    well i think i just might have to get me a little when i get home after reading that one. nice job.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    July 17, 2006
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    Oooooh Louie, dang, if this got any HOTTER!! This, most assuredly, is one of your best ones, sweetie! Thank you for sharing and for jump starting my already over active imagination! Very very well written!


  • candyinchelsea
    July 17, 2006
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    very yummy,
    i would love an afternoon like this.
    thanks for sharing
    candy

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