skin as white as snow
skin that always glows
eyes that sparkle
and a bow that is red
only the queen wants her dead
for she is the fairest
so what shall she do
for snow white is in hiding
how will she start killing
she called upon the dwarfs
to act nice and invite her
make sure they gain her trust
so they will soon kill her
the dwarfs agreed
because when they succeed
the queen will reward them
within the boundaries of their dreams
they found white within the forest
certainly they will take her in
to their cottage she stayed
and her trust for them grew
little she knew
that they would kill her
the queen poisoned her with the apple
but little did they know
that love did save her
but that was only once they said
second with the queen's power at hand,
they drew upon a curse to her
for when the spinning wheel will prick her hand
she will be dead
that didn't work too
love saved her again
the queen was getting mad and she said
"you will get no reward if you fail again,"
"your reward will be your lives,"
"you will die instead of her."
desperate for their lives they attempted again
to kill the princess once more
for they trapped her in a wonderland
And this would do the trick
for the queen of hearts would surely get to her
and she would be through
the did so
but little did they know
that she would find her way back home
they grew angry and decided
that fairy tale tricks wouldn't do it
they stabbed her in her sleep
in a sense of relief
and that is the story of snow white and the seven daemons
Author notes
this is a twisted version of snow white with some stuff from sleeping beauty and alice in wonderland
Written July 17th, 2006
A contest entry
- Fractured Fairy Tales by befearless247.
307 points, ended July 22, 2006, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This was another really entertaining poem, I loved it! I loved the idea of combining three fairy tales in one poem or story!
Keep up the greatwriting!
Ann
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This is part of your 4th place points...
I'm sooooo sorry that they don't give out 4th place trophies.... If they did, you would get one. And because I am running out of points, you will get an appluase and your 4th place points. Greeat work, thanks sooo much for entering!
-Chantelle -
Wow. Loved it through and through. I liked how you tied in the 3 fairy tales to make one, big, giant, fractured fairy tale. i enjoyed readint he twist and plot of this, you really played it out well. Its poems like this that make my judging that much harder.....
I loved it so much, I'm reading it again!!! Thanks for entering. Keep up the marvelous work!
-Chantelle
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