Please baby, take a seat, relax for a while. Let me
Reach your fantasy, so that
I may watch you smile. When I'm good, I'm
Very good. But when I'm bad, I'm better.
Allow me baby, to please and
Tease, God, I'm getting wetter.
Experience all my chills and thrills, as I
Dance across your cock. Hips roll
And sway with this rhythm that we rock.
Needs and wants be met, as we
Culminate in lust's desire.
Exploding deep into the night, and squelch the
Raging of our fire.
Author notes
Title per Tina Turner
Written July 17th, 2006
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Moi? Never. I wouldn't do something like that.
And I bet you wouldn't mind.
Thanks for the comments
Storm -
Damn woman! You trying to melt the site down, or what? I have to say I agree, way too short. But it works. Cmon over and dance for me darling, I won't mind!
-Jay
Edited on Jul 18, 1:39 p.m. because 'uh, hands too occupied to type, lol'. -
Addicted? I try. LOL.
THanks for the comment James, glad you enjoyed.
Storm -
OOOh, pour me a cool one, all over my body. I'm a man in need of a good lap dance - this is the closest so far.
Your themes are a bit steamy, but so refreshing. A man could get addicted to this. Great work Storm. Keep on writing. James -
LOL that's not why I made it so short. The title is only so long, and me and the damn acrostics. As I mentioned above, I promise to make the next one rediculously long. So long and detailed, you might as well be doing the act as you read. LOL. Sorry, just being an ass.
Thanks for commenting, appreciate it.
Storm -
yes, much much better
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LMAO, so I've been told already. OK, ok, I'll have to work on a long, extavagant, really drawn out sexual escapade. Better?
Thanks for commenting.
Storm -
Very teasin and pleasin, just like a private dancer. Thats probably why you made it so short just to tease us. What you have there though is very hot and sexy. Thanks for sharing.
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awesome and very very sexy
storm, i have one comment........ TO SHORT!!!
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John, dear friend, this is no tease
For in the end, my aim's to please
It's merely a taste, you see
Of a little erotic fantasy
Listen to the music, it's pulsing beat
And feel the tantalizing heat
Now when you close your eyes, and wonder
This private dancer you'll see in slumber.
Glad to at least have made you smile. I'll be sure to get more detailed next time. Thank you for your comments hun. Appreciate them as always.
Much love and
Storm -
I'm so excited I'm vibrating here, watching as you dance so near, I can feel and smell you with my soul, your movements make me want to lose control! Your breasts swell as they brush my face, God, where the hell is this dancing place!!! Very enticing little tease here dear friend! Too short for my tastes, but it was very interesting and piqued my desires! thanks for bringing a smile to a dreary face today! much love, john
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