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Endless Barrier

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A canvas of cerulean as twilight draws near.
Millions of sparkling eyes light up the cosmos,
Dancing along the luminescence of moonbeams.

Puffs of stark white, drift lazily by,
As winds whisper the secrets of the Heavens.


Lazuline ripples, dip and sway the horizon.
Foamy caps swirl and twirl,
A waltz of the great blue yonder.

The rushing swish brings serenity,
As waves sing the song of the Seas.


In the distance, lies a sapphire skyline,
The place where the Heavens and the Seas meet.

It is where, this gem of nature,
Is the endless barrier of life.

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Written July 17th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 28, 2006
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    Thank you for your comments, they are much appreciated.

    Storm

  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    July 28, 2006
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    Some intriguing imagery...your talent in writing words is undoubtably clear in this piece, and radiates loveliness...

    I can hear the sound of the waves and can smell the salty air through your vivid descriptions thank you

    ~Lilac~

  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    July 17, 2006
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    A warm welcome

    ~Lilac~

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 17, 2006
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    Thank you for your kind words, I appreciate the.

    Storm

  • rainyday woman
    July 17, 2006
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    Very beautiful, I like how you took the jurney through the different shades of blue. You have penned a wonderful sight. Good luck in this contest and everything that you do.
    Cheryl
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