The sun precedent to the awakening,
Taking its place in the vacant sky,
Its impassive attack on the darkness,
Evasive to the destruction of man.
The loons come out to eat they're fish first,
Fleeting as an eclipse comes,
Impossible to stay out of the moons shadow,
They're hiding from shadow defectively.
The night comes again to sanctify the day,
Elusive to the minds of feeble humans,
The darkness transcending the light,
The howl of a lone wolf...night wins over day this time.
Author notes
heh worked out well to find an eclipse discription with these words. i love being a human dictionary.
Written July 17th, 2006
A contest entry
- ~Word Bank~ by xXxJenxXx.
300 points, ended July 24, 2006, 6 entries
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Great work here! You met the challenge well, methinks!
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hey thanks for pointing it out i kinda always mes up like that and ii am kinda to lazy n busy to change it but mebe sometime i will fix that spelling mistake thanks again cya.
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The spelling of looses is incorrect. It should be loses. The word "loose" means "not tight" and not defeated.
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Wow! That is awesome! I don't have a vocabulary like that! You are a great poet!
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great job! thanks for entering
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