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without you...

woven dreams
on restless eyes,
wishful fantasies
in secluded nights,
is all of yours... all is yours.

your shadow
is my identity,
your dreams
are my reality,
its you and you... in my soul and heart.

arduously, I garnered
colours of life,
garnished them
to your smile,
your dreams are waiting... waiting on my eyes...

when you smile
with life I unite,
in your smile
my whole world reside,
its you and you... all around.

Oh! Apurva 'n' Ayush,
I'm in you...
I'm lost in you...
How can i forget you...
How can in forget you...???

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Written June 17th, 2006

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  • baawri
    September 29, 2006
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    cool

    I dont know why i am having a feel that i had read it earlier.I know you terribly you miss them.But meeting with and parting with companions is a part of life.I feel from many of your poems that you are unable to accept this and you lament over the lost ones.From time long I have been waiting from you for a poem relating to social issues.Coming to this write it has a gorgeous flow and the melancholy of writer is dripping from each word of the writer that makes me worried about you.Enjoy present forget past.This is the mantra to solve the chakravayuha called life.


  • Sitara
    July 22, 2006
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    very beautiful

    This is very beautiful,I loved each feeling,the depth,te words,the pain,Very well done Abhimanyu,May your pain turnto..... ,how long are you going to mourn? Iwant everyone to read your poem so i am .....