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Things gone wrong

You say you dont know whether you still want me,
That you are confused about everything.
How long should I give you to decide what you want?

A few weeks ago things were fine.
You said you really liked me and couldn't wait to see me.
Please explain to me why things have changed.

I can not understand this,
Is it something that I have done?
Or will I hear that reason 'Its me not you'

I really thought that things would work out,
Now I'm not so sure.
I'm confused now too, about everything except my feelings for you.

That's the difference between us,
My feelings are as clear as ever.
And because of that i know that I can not give up so easily on you and me.

So I will wait a while,
For you to decide.
But you must know that I will not wait forever.

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Written July 17th, 2006

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  • unchained fears
    July 18, 2006
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    great poem you did an amazing job i felt the emotion behind it
    *flying*

  • Momentaryhappiness
    July 17, 2006
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    you saying that is more than enough. thank you. i suppose i just have to wait this week to see what he decides he wants!

  • rockchick247
    July 17, 2006
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    awwwwwww! i feel so bad for you! boys eh! i don't think there is much i can do xcept say that you can always talk 2 me!

  • Momentaryhappiness
    July 17, 2006
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    yeah i should let him know that, but i still love him! i'm trying to stay strong. and whats stupid is the one thing thats keeping me going at the moment is the tiny bit of hope still left in me thinking that maybe things will work out.....

  • rockchick247
    July 17, 2006
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    he's so not good enough for you, make sure he knows that! you can't help who you fall in love with but keep strong and keep writing!

  • Momentaryhappiness
    July 17, 2006
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    thank you. i know i shouldnt wait. but theres still part of me that hopes things will work out. i know i shouldnt but i suppose thats the problem with falling in love with someone! it blinds you!

  • Momentaryhappiness
    July 17, 2006
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    thanks for the comment


  • July 17, 2006
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    great

    In this piece you sounded very confused. Like either this guy did like you or not. I loved it. I hate when guys confuse u and they tell u one thing but means a whole different thing. Its like wtf..dude..make up your mind. Either he wants you or not. Anywho..it seems as if you had your hopes up and got them stomped and trampled on. Typical guy to say "its not you. its me"...which basically means ur not giing it up..or its not good enough so get lost...i am pretty sure every girl in the whole damn wide world has gone thru this before and has felt this way before. Hunni bun...do not wait for him. Obviously he's not good enough for you..hes not worth the wait. More loves will come along. Just give it a chance babygirl. Keep ur head up. Great job.
    xoxo
    Im always here to talk

    courtney
    <3333

  • beetroot
    July 17, 2006
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    Similar to a situation Im going through..so this poem strikes a chord. Keep up the gd work!

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