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My fairytale: part 8

He gently wiped her tears away
and said "I know your hurt
but if you'll take your time and stay
I'll prove your pain is not inert."
She closed her eyes and didn't say a word
She couldn't trust herself to speak
He said, "I know my little bird."
And her eyes began to leak
"how did you know it was me?"
She said soft as a dove
"I'd know you anywhere you see,
That's the glory of my love."
"what happened to your dear Kristine?"
She asked, eyes full of tears
"She wasn't even near pristine,
and I've loved you for years!"

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Written July 17th, 2006

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