Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

||OhGodHelpMePleaseThisIsn'tRight||

Hold me :: touch me

But please don’t love me

I can’t be your savior

When I can’t even .s.a.v.e. myself

Please don’t ^break^ me

And  ~hold~ me down

Baby just  f o r g e t  about me

I’m bleeding can’t you take the HINT?

I can’t keep pretending to be okay.

This is [w][r][o][n][g] in all the [r][i][g][h][t] ways.

I want the \new/ slate I have been given.

But I will come back ||eventually||

[[Maybe.]]

I //can’t// promise…

Author notes


Written July 17th, 2006

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • SheWasPreternatural
    March 13, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    Love this. Love the title and the way it was written- especially the "I can’t keep pretending to be okay.

    This is [w][r][o][n][g] in all the [r][i][g][h][t] ways." part.. sorry for your pain, but this is a beautiful poem.


  • xFirexAtxWillx
    July 17, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Uh,
    Lost story short.
    Me and Trevor are back together.
    And yes I am moving to Florida.
    In 2 and a half months to be exact.


  • PlayLikeWeAreInLove gold member
    July 17, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    hey. good poem, although i have no idea what it's about. hope ur okay!
    ~Karinn


  • Jillybean128
    July 17, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Wow...what a powerful write! I can feel the pain in this piece. You are a talented writer! Thanks for sharing...