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Our Night



It creeps into my mind when I least expect it
and I feel your presence all over again
It was a special time for us
It was a time that has stood still for the both of us
It is a time that I relive in my mind constantly
I enjoy when we talk about Our Night
and share our feelings and desires

What a feeling of total comfort we offered eachother
How totally eurphoric
It was sensual, erotic and seductive
How moved I am by you, how you thrill me
And now, having been with you
has only starved me for more of you

Your kisses sent me places I only dreamed about with you
Your touch made me feel as I knew I would,
Sexy and wanted, a Total Woman
I close my eyes and I can feel you here with me
I close my eyes and I see your face looking back at me
A face filled with passion and total masculine sexuality

Our Night is locked up in a special place in my heart
that only you have access to
Only you can open that special place with your
tender and gentle words of affection

I know that we must deal with what we have
until we can be together again
But no matter how long it takes, it will never
diminish the feelings we experienced that night
Nothing can ever diminish them
They were true,  pure and so very exciting
And I will be forever remembering Our Night

Author notes

This was written about a very special night a long time ago. It is still one of my fondest memories...life has moved us in different directions but we will always have Our Night
Written July 16th, 2006

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  • Odio
    October 4, 2006
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    This is very nice, and very well written. I like it!! :-)
  • plangent
    July 23, 2006
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    Keep secret memories in a safe little box to cherish. There was so much passion in this piece - must have been one hell of a good night!! Slainte (means cheers) S

  • alameda
    July 16, 2006
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    i can relate to this a lot. just having a first who you always remember, and having memories that you feel will haunt you forever. sometimes even wondering what things would be like if they were different, and the person was still in your life. ugh. i love this poem. it's so deep. amazing job, keep up the good work! <3
  • Jeremy Kyle Klub
    July 16, 2006
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    Such a lovely heartfelt poem, made me feel a lot, you are a very talented writer, and you write from the heart - user name says it all, keep going x