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You're Like a Diamond

So you tell me
You aren't nice
Oh, you know you're like a diamond

Grin and bare it
In the sunshine
And travel down a desert roadway

And she smiles
Sure she knows
So sad inside I feel I'm dying

Have I ever made you feel
Not alone in this big world

So
This is how it all comes down now

I
Feel I must be on my own now

Time
Will be on my side I think now

Have I ever made you feel
Not alone in this big world

Rise and shine
Greet the new day
Live just like you never saw me

Shining brightly
In the sunlight
My you look just like a diamond

I've no chance now
With all the others
I think right now I'll run and outside and play

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Written July 16th, 2006

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  • x CheepPurfume
    July 16, 2006
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    Very Very VERY Great work, ya got here. True emotion was poured out when you wrote. I love the whole concept with the Diamond. Extremly wonderful and very clever. Keep up the awesome work, would ya?

    Tori