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A Brand New Beautiful World

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What a beautiful world where all things can fly
Here in this realm there is no more reason to cry

The colors are whatever you want them to be
Here all has been created by you and me

All life on this planet is loving and friends
We talk to each other all barriers end


Peace and serenity exists all over the earth
We live in harmony, happiness and mirth

No envy or jealousy, anger or strife
Every creature respects and values all life

Nature supplies us with every single need

No more gluttony, covetousness, or greed

The beauty that surrounds even dwells within
All love is accepted no longer a sin

God is still the Father and His love is the key

A beautiful new world where all live peacefully

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Written July 16th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    September 16, 2006
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    Thanks! Let me know when in will accept prewrites.

  • Across-the-Universe
    September 16, 2006
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    This is really good!
    I'd love it if you'd enter this in the contest!

  • Janice M Pickett gold member
    July 18, 2006
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    this is awesome and the picture just as great. Well done and it's sad to see you missed out on the contest. never mind though it is afterall the preference of the judge. I am sure this would have been given a place if there were more awards available.

    Jan

  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    July 16, 2006
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    Thank you so much, I am glad you liked it. That would be such a perfect and beautiful world! Oh well, we can dream. Great contest, thanks.

  • WhrUwan2B
    July 16, 2006
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    what a beautiful world. I love how you describe everything! Thank you for creating such a beautiful and peaceful world! Thank you for sharing and Good Luck

  • DarkHunter
    July 16, 2006
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    Perfect

    What a perfect world you have created in this poem. It is truly beautiful and the picture is amazing. Wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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