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Star light, moon bright, grant my wish tonight


Seven silver moonlight blade kisses
Between moments of thought and absence of course
Subtle seduction upon moon rays of gifted pleasure
Between movements of metal and whispers of something better
There never could be a “together”, or “once”, and “forever”.
Pathetic pessimism exhaled like the wasted breath
Between manifestations of “beauty” and “beast”
The “heart” and the lonely “fist” collide in beautiful destruction
Blood stained kisses, beautiful and terrible…
As you rake the blade across your tainted, pale, skin

Author notes

This is suppose to be heavy (people read it SLOW) in pauses so anywhere you think a pause might go put it there. (tis more an emo spoken word - which I don't do).

It should come across emo, heavy, and slow.

It is nothing special just a bit of the emo on me.
Written July 16th, 2006

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  • Angel With No Halo
    August 13, 2006
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    I think you did an amazing job with this write. I enjoyed it thouroughly this part got me the most

    Pathetic pessimism exhaled like the wasted breath
    Between manifestations of “beauty” and “beast”
    The “heart” and the lonely “fist” collide in beautiful destruction

    These lines were awesome. i will read more of your work when I get the chance. Thanks for sharing it!!

    ~Krys~