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Yesterday i was crying
And i didnt tell you why
It was because i miss you
When i look up in the sky

I got over one of my x's
That i had for over two years
And now i love you
And all you see is tears

When you brake up with me
I didn't know what to do
Because all i did
Was think about you

I sit in my bedroom
Thinking on why you dumped me
And now i know why
Its because you didn't like me

Now the next day
I hear your with a gurl
And when i heard of her
I wanted to hurl

When ever i talk to you
I start to cry
Because i miss you
In my life and by my side

I just want you to know
That i will always love you
No matter wat you do

I will love you
Till the end
Up in the sky
Over and over again

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Written July 16th, 2006

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  • This is so sad and runs around alot. I wound not like to have this pain again as I have not to long ago.


  • VanGoghNights
    August 30, 2006
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    BEAUTIFUL

    ... beautiful... purely beautiful...awesome fucking job.. i feel your pain here so much!!!!
    z
    ♥Savina♥


  • LonelyAlways
    July 17, 2006
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    Fuck bob. I dunno, Im disgusted with myself, for everything i have and havent done.But its too late to turn back, and i cant relive what already happened, im sorry, I miss u too, i do, damn......Im so sorry,
    Love
    your little whore


  • July 17, 2006
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    great

    This poem was very emotional. This reminded me of all the times when i loved sumbody and they broke up with me and got over me within a week. It hurts so much that it feel unbareable...i admire you for writing this poem. thank you. My favorite stanzas were:

    "When you brake up with me
    I didn't know what to do
    Because all i did
    Was think about you

    I sit in my bedroom
    Thinking on why you dumped me
    And now i know why
    Its because you didn't like me"

    I liked those two the most becuz i remember me sitting on my bed crying wondering and preying that you would come back to me. But you never did.

    Well i got one thing to say to u babygirl,
    Never regret sumthing that made you smile. Keep your head up. Great poem.
    xoxo

    Courtney
    <3