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With you

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WHEN I'M WITH YOU I FEEL THE
WORLD AT MY FEET,WITH YOU
STANDING BE-SIDE ME.

AND NO CAN STOP US FOR DOING
WHAT'S RIGHT AND WHAT'S WRONG.
WE CAN DO WHAT EVER WE WANT TO
DO WITH EACH OTHER AT OUR HEIGHT OF
OUR LOVE.

CHASING WHAT'S BEAUTIFUL AND
WHAT'S NOT TO FULLED WITH.

LOOKING AT THE TIME GOING
BY SLOW WHEN WE LOOK AT EACH.
OTHER IN THE EYE.

TELLING EACH OTHER THAT I LOVE YOU
HOLDING EACH OTHER CLOSELY.AND NO
TIME SPENT.

WHEN I'M WITH YOU I RE LEAS MY
STRESS AND FLY AWAY TO YOUR ARMS.

LOOKING AT THE WAY YOU LOOK AT ME
EVERY TIME WE SEE EACH OTHER.

WHEN I'M LOOKING AT YOU I REMEMBER
THE TIME THAT SLOWED DOWN TO A CRAWL.

AND YOUR RE-ACTION OF THE TIME WE
SPENT TOGETHER.

WHEN I'M WITH YOU I AM WITH YOU.




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Written July 15th, 2006

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  • trekkergirl
    January 25

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    first off why all caps? This makes it appear like you are yelling. Also, your AN didn't make much sense to me. But I guess someone somewhere understood it. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it in my contest.