Mommy, you’re as delicate as morning dew.
You’re the cure of any pain and woe.
You’re that unlimited ocean with pure water;
I’m just a paltry drop, trying to join you, mother!
There are two suns shining in your eyes,
Warming this paltry dew, raising up to skies.
When I have your hand in mine, my vernal bloom,
Then I’m ready to fight any doom and gloom.
You’re an angel gifted from above
With silver wings, spreading kindness and love.
You’re the sunrise of happiness, sunset of pain.
You’re more magnificent for words, I’m trying in vain.
This Red Apple is painted for you, my goodness.
Maybe you forget my bitterness to its sweetness.
I’ll break words dam and say:
Happy happy mother’s day.
Author notes
Today is the birth of Fatemeh s.a (The daughter of our holy prophet Mohammad)and mother's day in Iran. I've composed this poem to all mothers on AP especially to my own mom.
Written April 14th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- mothers day poems by x Bright Eyes x.
525 points, ended March 15, 2007, 27 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - mothers day by honey bear.
600 points, ended March 13, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this very beautiful dedication, my fave lines are these two..
When I have your hand in mine, my vernal bloom,
Then I’m ready to fight any doom and gloom
wonderful my friend
(i am sorry that i did not know what day you celebrated mothers day i shall put it on the contest page although a little late, forgive me )
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hi i thought this was vey well written and a really nice read thank you for entering and i wish you the best of luck hun
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Nice write and GL in my contest
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Beautiful sentiments, my dear. I'm sure your mom was proud and pleased by this. This is the kind of material I was looking for in this contest. thank you for entering.
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Such a beautiful poem, so full of emotion and love. Good luck in the contest.
Theresa
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this was such a tender write. thank you for entering and good luck
Hugs, Suzi -
A wonderful poem you have penned here. Very heartfelt. Thank you for entering our contest. The Best of luck to you. Take care, Sandy
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Nice poem.Well written.Thanks for entering and best of luck
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I love her too.
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Adorable and loving piece for a mother,they are so special & this poem expresses how special they can be...you have used smart words that rhymes very well..
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oh my dearest daughter, love you much and love the delicate and so beautiful words you penned here, wonderful words my dear.
love you so.
your AP mom
Nermin
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wow very nice poem....Good luck in my contest
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".....When I have your hand in mine, my vernal bloom,
Then I’m ready to fight any doom and gloom.
You’re an angel gifted from above
With silver wings, spreading kindness and love......."
Man's eternal relation with his mother is stronger than rock, and deeper than the Pacific; it is higher than the Everest and more sublime than fragrant roses.....Dear Vernalleafoo!...your wonderful and delicate poem certainly needs a spectacular applause and a stupendous admiration. Though, my pen is weak and humble and does not have strength to acknowledge the value of this great poem full of passionate red roses and white jasmines of pure love for your kind mother, even then I am trying to write some comments for this great piece. My words are meek and feeble, and your imagination is elevated and great....You look like a fresh and melodious song sung by the Seven Muses at the peak of Olympus in ancient Greece!... May God empower your pen more and more little fairy, innocent maiden!!!!! It is undoubtedly a great piece worthy of forwarding to every mother on mom's day!!!!!
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Excellent!!
This is really wonderful Massy. I did not know it was mother's day in Iran now... lol
but the poem is maginificent and very very true. An excellent write my dear, with a very nice rhyme and flow and excellent choice of words.
I love it!
Good luck in the contest and keep on writing,
Nooni
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This is a nice, loving poem dedicated to mothers...I wish my mom was half as good as what this poem expressed...thanks for entering my contest much love, Raneika -
that was wonderful. it was so beautiful and it described what a bond with a mother feels like. it was amazing. i loved the part when you said, "There are two suns shining in your eyes, Warming this paltry dew, raising up to skies." it was simply beautiful.
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I love this. I myself am a mom of 4. I love this so much. I hope you will keep up this wonderful penmenship. Great, Just lovely.
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Wonderfull
Oh dear sister what a delightfull dedication for your mom. As a parent i know that this is the most special and most precious gift you can get. Your works reflect how much your mom means to you. Absolutely fantastic done. Thank you for sharing this special poem from your hand. hugs your Dutch bro Herman -
good work from a good being........god bless
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This has lovely sentiments and I envy your mother for having a child this caring. Nicely rhymed. Needs some work to make it into English couplets.
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This poem really beautiful, I like it heaps, but I can't really relate to the poem due to the fact that I'm just simply not that close to my mum. Anyways, keep up the good work and have a good day.
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mothers are always best friends, you can share anything with them the biggest the secret it may be. even if the world becomes your foe, you'll still find a friend in her. Assalam Alaika Ya Ummaho (Hale to you my Mom) and Assalam Alaika Ya Umme Abiha s.a
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this is really nice...it's great that you think of your mother this way i definitly can relate to some of thses words although i'll never get to hold my mum's hand again....well done
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