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Goodbye

Goodbye to all the pain
Goodbye to all the sorrow
Now is the time
To live for tomorrow

Wake up with the sun
Start life anew
Let go of the past
And to myself, be true

Smile the biggest smile,
Dance in the rain
Nothing left to lose
But oh so much to gain

New paths, new wonders
New visions lift me high
Letting go of yesterday
No more tears to cry

So I say goodbye
To the life I once knew
Looking to the future
For life to start anew

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My own personal desire to forever say goodbye to my past.
Written July 15th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 15, 2006
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    Well, I am learning that we live and learn from this trials of our life, but yes they can be hard and trying.

    Thanks for the comments, much appreciated.
    Storm

  • Magickal Moon
    July 15, 2006
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    A very nice poem Storm. Very hopeful indeed. I too am trying to say goodbye to certain things and move on. Very hard sometimes I know. We are all on this journey called life, and each must learn his/her own path. Thx for sharing. Blessed - James

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 15, 2006
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    Yes Jay, I am hoping I can pass some of the things hitting my heart and move forward somehow. Of course it's hard when I feel alone. I know you're there, and others too, but still, I feel very alone right now. Thank you for being you. And your comments.

    Storm

  • HurricaneJay
    July 15, 2006
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    Storm:

    I do so hope this is written because you are finally willing to try and move forward. I know of so many of the difficult things you have endured, and I know there are more that you haven't spoken of. Know my dear friend, I am here if ever you need someone to talk to, or just a shoulder to cry on. In moments, I am there sweetie, and always will be.
    love ya much
    -Jay
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