Loves Dream
Listen to the whisper of the gentle breeze
Observe how it rustles through my hair.
Visions of my love appear in my dreams
Each time he comes a little bit closer
Secure in the knowledge I will find him.
Dreams have a way of showing what the heart
Requires to make our lives complete again.
Etched deep within my mind is his image
As I sleep the dreams I have of him are real
May he appear soon so we can live the dream.
Jenelda White July 15th 2006
Author notes
Inspired by the picture
Written July 15th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Only Members of Hugh Wyles Fav Group Contest: #15; Love, Love, Love by huguenauties.
889 points, ended July 13, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Dear Jen,
Beautifully Penned! Your gentle spirit sings in longing and tenderness. I must confess, I’ve listen to the gentle breeze among the lilac trees. May what you dream and pray become the true meaning of your life.
“Dreams have a way of showing what the heart
Requires to make our lives complete again.”
Ah such sweet harmony, may this love forever be complete shortly. Best of luck in the contest, a heavenly Acrostic! ~Love and Hugs, Sharon~
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Love's Dream will certainly come true with these beautiful words that you have written. I enjoyed your poem very much and wish you the best in the contest.
Hugs and love,
Petratani xo
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I had that dream before, in the past, so I know the power of its wish. He'll come, or you'll find him. Life works that way I think.
I had a dream about a monster chasing me the other day...lets hope that one doesn't come true!
I liked:
"Dreams have a way of showing what the heart
Requires to make our lives complete again."
That was my favorite part.
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Very nice, Jen!
My wish for you...May all your dreams come true SOON!
Love,
Maureen
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Very pretty
Beautiful, Jen! The words flow so well, the acrostic is like an afterthought. I love the idea of dreams showing what is needed, especially your thought "to make our lives complete again", which implies inherent wholeness temporarily missing. Beaut poem, good luck!
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Dear Jenelda
A beautiful expression of subconscious love which matches the picture very well.
Sometimes our dreams can seem so real that, on awaking, we yearn fot them to continue but they fade.
Sometimes a real love can fade and become little more than a dream in retrospect.
In our loves we live and never to have loved or dreamed is not to have lived at all.
A very appropriate entry. Good luck in the voting.
Applause, love and hugs, Hugh (R.)
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A Lovely Acrostic
Dear Jen,
I hope the love you have been dreaming of does come into your life. Everyone deserves to know true love. I know you've been disappointed in the past, but the next one could be him.
A lovely Acrostic dear Niece
Love A/J
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Dear Jen,
I see you wrote this a year ago, has your dream lover come into your life yet? You haven't mentioned anyone special.
Very nice poem dear Cuz.
Love Hine.
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very nice Jen
But hey have I missed something since we last chatted. The big move etc???? Is that over???
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Yeah Jan, I've had the big move, it didn't work out so I'm back in Sydney.
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good
i bet this immagination is really deep, and how deep u have mad the words so strong!
this 3rd line.....Visions of my love appear in my dreams
this is reall good jenni.
long time friend it me abdul. it nice always coming to read ur work. -
splendid
this is internal, bound with emotion, more of embrace
reall work good keep it up freind .
Dreams have a way of showing what the heart
Requires to make our lives complete again.
if this can happen i will be happy to be complete again
and again
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Thank you for commenting.
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Wow! Amazing. Thanks for your entry.
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