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Secretly In Love

Uncontrollable moments reflected at inopportune times
And a day full of memories is brought to a close

Restless nights of sleep that always seem to end
And desperately I wish that they would stay

…am I the girl of your dreams?

You are the boy in mine.

The moments flow at the beat of your heart
Pounding against my impatient thoughts

Tomorrow will come because I cannot stop time
And how I wish to spend it all with you

…do you need me in any way?

I will need you always.

To be able to understand your mind
Would be my greatest accomplishment by far

I will never know why you chose to be with me
Or why you have let yourself fall in love

…can you love me forever?

I will love you for always.

I will never ask to be all of your life
Just your favorite part

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Written July 15th, 2006

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  • Pussy Kat
    December 28, 2006
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    Aw!

    This was pure sweetness & full of lust! I really took a liking to this... & am planning on reading it again! I am impressed on how such a simple structure can prove to be effective. You've writen from the heart and have released such emotions that I can relate to. Thank you for sharing x

  • Crash
    July 17, 2006
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    ummmmmmmmmm yeah. can we clone you??? hehehehe. THat was awesome. Honest words from the heart. You don't expect the world, just to be the most important part of someone else's. It's nice to read, but almost depressing at thesme time. Because what you want is something you should already have in your situation. Still, an awesome read as always. It's great o be reading your writing again.....

    Crash