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our own little fairy tale

An angelic creature
once broken and torn
she has found a path
similar to the others
for a man came to her rescue

As if in Sleeping Beauty
her Prince ever so softly kissed
the thoughts of death away from her lips

see the scars made from revenge and grief?
no more will the shadows call out her name

Be my wings baby and together
we will soar
for fate has again came into
our lives only leaving a love
one to last forever more

unlike Cinderella don't let midnight strike
for without my Prince Charming
I fear i will never shine

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Written July 15th, 2006

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  • themechanic31305
    July 19, 2006
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    hey i know who this is about! lol ilove ya &heats;


  • Sabracadabra
    July 15, 2006
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    WOW! this poem is very good..i love it...i think it has become one of my fav poems!