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obsessed

The truth hurts
But its important to know the truth
Right?
So here we go...
Your not the funniest
Or the best looking
Or the one that understands me best
You're just you
And you are OBSESSED
I have honestly never seen someone half as obsessed
It is sort of funny
But i can't help feeling sorry for you
And me
And him
And her
And just about everyone else!
I know its hard to see things
Like whats staring you in the face
ME!!!!!
Yes little old me
But you can quite happily talk to everyone else
APART from me
Which is really annoying

Yes

VERY annoying

But hey i can live with that
Sometimes





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Written July 15th, 2006

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  • Jess-Pang
    April 27, 2007
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    kool

    I like it!!
    lol
    Jess xx


  • MikHeal T HaVoC
    April 17, 2007
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    Nice...

    Obsession..i think this is a wide open topic/poem...it could be taken so many different ways if you sit and think about it long enough...obsessions...everyone has one at some point, may it be with a person, object, or anything else...like this stupid little girl sitting right beside me right now....completely annoying...she wont leave me alone....srry

  • rockchick247
    July 19, 2006
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    lucky/unlucky you. depends hu it is i suppose! thanx 4 ur comments. i really like your poems!


  • Tik-Tok-Baby
    July 19, 2006
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    Oh with me...

  • rockchick247
    July 19, 2006
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    with sum1 else or with you? lol

  • Tik-Tok-Baby
    July 19, 2006
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    I really like this poem...It's a wonderful write. I know what it's like to have someone obsessed...lol...

    Ayla

  • Momentaryhappiness
    July 17, 2006
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    its hard to stand and watch someone who like someone else! maybe if they cant see what is standing there staring them straight in the face then they dont deserve it! good write.


  • love my jose luis
    July 15, 2006
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    Hey, sometimes it's not half bad to have someone who's totally obssesed with you, sometimes it's kinda fun, but I do agree with you, it does get very annoying at times. I loved this poem, keep your great writing up.

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