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.You're.What.I.Need.

In this moment time stands still
Our eyes, aligned, are ready to see
But neither of us can truly know...

Tomorrow would not exist
If we did not try today
&
I will never hold you back
As long as you bring me along

You don't need me as I need you
But maybe you need me in some way
&
God is the only one that knows how much I love you
No matter how hard I try

Although you may need more space
I could never see myself without you
&
Every day I think of you
Every day I hope you think of me too

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Written July 14th, 2006

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  • Pussy Kat
    December 28, 2006

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    Lovely!

    You have a very lucky guy! I hope he appriciates you as all your fans at AP do! I think that this is piece to be proud of because you have summed up your emotions for this man very clearly. Every line has a meaning, there is nothing that needn't be included. A poem full of sutbleness. Once again... I can relate. x