She walks with flashlight in hand, assuring herself that no ones there.
She creeps on her hardwood floor, suddenly a noise is heard. Creak.
She spins, to find nothing. She tells herself not to be scared.
She turns back around, only to find the shadow of a man, or some kind of freak.
She tries to scream, she has no voice, her body is numb.
He creeps closer to reveal a horned visage twisted in glee.
"Hello my dear" the abomination states "a part of my *coven* you shall become."
He whisks her away, to join his prison of tortured souls, the dark abductee.
Her roomate returns from a night on the town.
She calls her friends name to be answered by the breeze.
She searches the house only to find no one around.
For her friend was gone, stolen away with ease.
Worried, the girl reaches for the phone to call a cop.
She pauses when she notices all has gone silent and bleak.
Puzzled, she walks around and hears a noise that makes her stop.
Creak.
Author notes
Author's Note= Before reading I ask that you read 'Bump in the Night, Pt. 1' as they are a set. Thanks.
Written July 14th, 2006
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Interesting, not quite as well written as the first though. I like it, but the flow is pretty bluntly; fucked. The lines were just too long for my taste, and it screwed with the rhyme. Sorry if that's a little harsh, but hey, that's who I am. I liked it, but having already read the first I know you could've done better.
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i like this....
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i like it!
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so awsome. love the way she reaches for the phone & she hears the creak. this one i would have to say was not realy darker, but it was more of a storry. still awsome loving it. keep it up.
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this was a better contuance than the Pirates of the Carribean. lol this had the same intensity as the before and just as mysterious as well. but more creepy. is this the end of the epic or is there more?
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