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Autumn's Fae

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She flutters in, an autumn breeze
Casting hues of golds and browns
And leaves swirl and twirl
As they fall to earth's ground

Trees, skimp and scanty
Still a beauty in her sight
Evening falls much faster
As she slowly draws the light

The autumn winds now whisper
As she sweeps wings through the air
The flora of the fall
Gently flows from her hair

With her cascading locks, and rustic eyes
For the time, she's come to play
It's the changing of the seasons
She is Autumn's Fae

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Written July 14th, 2006

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  • Knight70
    November 24, 2007

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    Wow!!

    I need to keep reading your work. Damn, you're good!! Don


  • Breo Saighit
    August 1, 2006
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    Absolutely Wonderful

    I love it. The imagery it invokes is marvelous. I like the easy flow created by using words that make it feel like it is dancing. One can truly see the subtle play of the wind through the trees.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 15, 2006
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    Thank you for commenting, I appreciate it.

    Storm

  • Dream Priestess
    July 15, 2006
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    Wow That is a great poem,Wonderfully written, I love the imagery it conveys and the picture works well with the poem. Great Job, Keep one writing. Blessed be and live Free.

    Spirit Dancer

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 14, 2006
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    It is my favorite time as well, for a few reasons. But I think he main is it is a time when all the old starts to fade away. Memories of the past, and so on, looking for the renewal spring will bring.

    Thanks for the comments hun
    Storm

  • greyhaime silver member
    July 14, 2006
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    this is fabu! I love the image.. and the images that the words bring are great. this is I think my favorite time of the year.. and have written many on the subject.. great write.
    Krystal
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