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She Ran Away

the breeze hits my face
all i feel is cold
cold piercing my heart
because of him

he doesn't even know
how much i love him
and he turns me down
with his piercing stare

his green eyes
can shatter any mask
and all your left with
is the real you

he walks towards me again
with purpose in his steps
and tells me to let go
of the past

i pull my jacket closer
as the waves rush faster
pulling me away
i just want to run

but i won't
because I've always wondered
what's behind his mask
i won't leave nor let go

i lean forward
whisper quietly to him
and somehow manage to leave
i ran away

he sank to the ground
and broke down
and quietly said
"i love you too"

Author notes

this isn't about me or anything i was just thinking of a story in my head. i couldn't think of a title so if anyone else has a good idea please let me know
Written July 14th, 2006

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  • secret angst
    July 15, 2006
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    its a really good poem. keep up the good work, and best of luck to you.