=Love and Hate=
Love and hate,
Woven like fine silk
In the fabric of life.
Intertwined, like fate,
They mess with our
Minds and thoughts,
Madness it creates...
Why, I cannot say.
Love and hate,
A perfect harmony
And a twisted fate.
=Love= =Hate=
Love is the greatest Hate, the deadliest
Emotion ever known
To be effected greatly by another even to the point of
Giving anything for them Wanting their destruction
Without holding back, without fear of what will happen
To fight and to die
For the one you love To see the one you hate die
Truly a powerful emotion to behold
Author notes
This trio of poems go together, bottom two show what the tope one describes.
Written July 14th, 2006
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I lke how you split this up.. the darks and the lights mix beautifully... another one i enjoyed to read.
" Love and hate,
A perfect harmony
And a twisted fate."
this was my fav... :-)
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Vary duilistic The stronger aspect of the light and the dark. Nice
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This was very interesting. Another one of your poetry styles which actually works quite well....but then, you already know that, don't you? I love the opposites you used here. Never the twain shall meet but boy, they travel very close to each other. Well done.
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I love this poem!
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Awesome post, keep going.
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Hey, thanks for entering. Doesn't really go with the theme of the contest, but very good none-the-less. thanks.
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wow, this is a very true and strong poem! good write! keep it up!!!!
Crimson -
It is a very clever style and gives the reader the two different points of view, it blends well and is finely crafted. Kudos to you.
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very well presented , unique , I like it ... you have described these conflicting emotions to a T...
=Love= =Hate=
Love is the greatest Hate, the deadliest
Emotion ever known
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the colour combination you chose for the poem drapes in darkness. brighten it to have a better view of the good verse
love as i am telling always is a rare commodity to be securely preserved in heart like a treasure. -
This is anawesome write, very well done and impressive thankyou for sharing
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Awesome
I love the way you did this. Is there a name for this style or did you just create it? good job on what must have been a difficult write. Pen on...
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I know i h8 those crappy love poems also. I just...i dont know i guess im a hyporcrit(sorry i suck at spelling) cuz i cant seem to stop writing them! :/ btw i read a couple of ur poems and i really like them...you have so much power, what im striving for in my poetry but unfortunatly havent yet accomplishe
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I have never seen a poem like this before! It is powerful and has great form and imagery that fascinates me!!
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very creative from you. thank you for sharing this with me. it is a write that most i know need to read as the message is powerful. i have one entitled words that reminded me of this. thank you for sharing again. viyanna rosemarie
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This is most interesting. How did you do this? It is beautifuly done.
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this is very unique and VERY VERY VERY interesting
I've never seen a poem like this its really cool
i love how the purple = red and blue mixed, and in the poem represents the actions willing to undergoe for either love or hate and that no matter how different they are, they are very similar
excellent
thanks for entering my contest
~With Love and Encouragement in everything that you do~ NoTears2Dry -
It will-this is exactly what I am looking for actually.
I will not review it though until it is entered in my contest.
But you may enter it as you wish.
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fantastic
Great originality, well thought out as well, id applaud this twice if i could. -
amazing
i loved the set up
I loved the message
Amazing
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I like the way you set it up, very creative. Beautiful poem, I hope to see more like it.
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Brilliant setup to this piece of writing. Unfortunately it is all too true as well, this love/hate combination. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
Dimitri -
Truly unique I loved it
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fascinating format, i love it. brilliantly done comparing and contrasting what often seems like (and sometimes are) complete opposites yet some of the aspects of the two are shared, like the amount of conviction behind the pure forms of them. just my opinion. i loved how this piece was set up and flowed, very good description and overall well-written. may peace go with you
~shadowlyn -
Excellant /intriguing
Ab so lut ly Fan tas tic, I love the unique format; it rally adds to the meaning of the poem. Very well done indeed. -
This was really interesting, my favourite part of it by far was the bottom section...I loved the way you set it up, and combined the two. Good job!
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This write was amazing..You are very talented...My favorite part at the beggining was
Love and hate,
A perfect harmony
And a twisted fate
I also liked the ending great write..keep it up like I said you are very talented
Take care
Ashley -
whoa! lend me some talent!
its amazing how you wrote them to be opposites but still recognized their similarities, and that the similarity is that they have much the same effect on someone when given. this is a very heavy topic, but you knew exactly what you were wanted to say and i love how you split the two at the end even though they still merged at other sections it was like i had to read the love side first and then go back and read the hate part but i really enjoyed this is was so original and i say that in a lot of comments but i mean it i have never read ebtries quite like these before and i am so honored to judge this contest and specifically read this poem. -
this is amazing how you captured the very essance of one extreame to another. i really enjoyed reading this.. awesome write!
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I am not saying I like the form but DAMN it is cool looking. I loved the layout and words you used. Truly a beautiful poem you have here. I liked how you wrote:
LoveHate
Love is the greatest Hate, the deadliest
Emotion ever known
That is my favorite "stanza" in your poem. Great job and good luck!
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I like this poem. I like how you did the form, it works good.
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wow . this write is brilliant . i like the way you set it up . just awsome
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Wow.This Was A Very Powerful, Organized,Strong Poem. The Division Was VERY Well Done, And It Was Very Open Minded And Had Beautiful Imagery. Wonderful Job. I Especially Liked This: A perfect harmony
And a twisted fate.
That,Is Beautiful. Best Of Luck.
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