I will live my life as best I can without manipulation from any outside force.
Author notes
Written July 14th, 2006
A contest entry
- one line, one trophy, ONE DAY!! by R.J.Valentine.
300 points, ended May 1, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Want Your Lifes' Motto In Five Lines Or Less by 2lullabyhaven.
600 points, ended June 10, 2007, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nicely Penned
Thank you for entering my contest. -
very nice. good luck to you in my contest.
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Excellent
Wonderful flow of the spirit of self reliance. Great job. I believe in being independent. And I try every chance I can when my wife gives me permission. -
Dear Funpum,
Independance is a wonderful thing!
I have been in too many circumstances where I had to trust and take advice from those I thought would want my good. (sigh)
The children - that's where our heart should be!
Thanks for your compliment.
Tang
(Son is back from camp - my buddy has returned!) -
Simple, direct, musical, honest.
This has a lovely rhythm and is nice to say-in fact I did say it several times over. It applies to me too. I am horrifically independant - my mum always complained that even as a baby I wouldn't cuddle her, I always struggled away -I'd only give love on my terms. Sadly I have remained that way, which can't be easy. The only people I'm not like that with are my children thank goodness.
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i understand you side
very well said
and i agree to that
*hugs*
smile now my King -
My Dearest Muse GodeSsOfTemPtati0n,
Thank you dear, I was irritated at someone at the time that I penned this at someone that was trying to tell me what I should do!
We must live our lives without having other dictate to us commands in our personal lives.
Tang -
lovely picture...
but your words are more beautiful than the picture
good luck my King
~ your muse ~ -
Dear WolfHeart,
Yep!
This is my first Pixiku!
Three lines of your philosophy I'm sure you might find the words for your montra to enter!
Thanks for your compliment!
Tang -
great
Thank you, I finally think I have the drift of these.
A wonderful philosophy and well written to boot!
Hugs WolfHeart -
Dear SEA angel,
Thanks so much for your rave review!
I do appreciate you compliments!
Tang -
EXCELLENT
You have an excellent eye for design and presentation. Also, this is an EXCELLENT Pixiku. Very well composed from words to background to text color and picture that all complement one another. -
Dear Lady Stone,
I checked where I picked it up from and the artist was not given - only that it is a reproduction.
So we shall share the dunce cap today - but I too loved it!
Thanks for the compliment on my quote.
Tang -
well said!
I liked it , the picture too, who did it, if you don't mind the small dunce hat that I am wearing now..
many blessings-
Krystal
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Dear StormGoddess,
I honored if you would like to post it on your page!
Thanks so much for your always wonderful compliments.
I'll be over in just a minute to check out your page again!
Tang -
I have always loved this quote on your bio page, and the fact that you changed the formatting a bit and used it here for this contest, well, it's fabulous.
I have a few fave quotes posted on my page, I am almost tempted to snag this and post it there...with credit of course.
Good luck in the contest
Storm
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